Reviews for Dance With the Devil

Reviews For: Dance With the Devil

Hiedler 2006-05-30 ch 4,	abuseWell that's an interesting way of looking at things. Why did this 'He' guy pick her? In my opinion, you should capitalize 'He' because he gives him more character. Like everythign religious referring to god is like. He rose from the dead and He blah blah and His blah blah. I don't know, more character, I guess. And what? 'but they would never catch me because he would never let them.' She did get caught! Why did he/would he betray her?
Ahemait 2006-05-25 ch 4,	abuseerror: and put slivers of then in their eyes' slivers of theM. i didnt know you put this up! in all truth, i SHOULD have known...but i didnt. ** me. anywho, so what happened to 'haha-i-know-his-name-but-these-other-people-dont' guy after she went into lala land?
Ahemait 2005-11-03 ch 3, anon.	abusekill him, he's annoying. hehe. good good. yup...
Hiedler 2005-05-25 ch 3,	abusehi, i'm detective holy *. how are you? heh heh, that was some good stuff. good story, kaitlin doesn't seem to be crazy nad i'm not sure WHY they would put her in there. so, she killed 32 people, that's prison. what'd she do to the bodies to make them think so was crazy? yeah, yeah, whatever. oh and yay! i have an email addres now...that's not my parents. because i now have my own! jumps up and screams idiotically* coughs anyway, good story, keep it up and please RR my poem...that isn't up yet, but should be soon, because right now fictionpress won't let me. but yeah, ya know what i mean, yes?
Darthen 2005-05-08 ch 3,	abusevery well written. keep up the good work.
Stephen Haramis 2005-04-28 ch 1,	abuseWOW, going to favorites...
Ahemait 2005-04-27 ch 3,	abuseoh coolness. and i read the last part on the second chapter. yes i am sending you reviews, i've been reviewing a lot lately. funny, no one (note: this is not directed at you) has the desencey to review me back. -rolls eyes- some people, eh?
Broken Melody 2005-04-23 ch 2,	abuseInteresting! Kind of creepy and mysterious!The song sounds famliar..? Did you write it?I like it so far!
Broken Melody 2005-04-23 ch 1,	abuseInteresting quote! I will see if it has anything to do with the story! Sorry haven't reveiwed for awhile but I have been busy... You haven't been reveiwing me either so no offence I don't really need to apolgize... any on to the next chapter!
Ahemait 2005-04-21 ch 2,	abusemwahahaha! so you did add stuff...a sentence...ah well! update more, dammit!!
Oni Starwind 2005-04-21 ch 2,	abuseVery discriptive. I like this story. Drama and a big clff hanger. If you get a chance check out one of my stories.
UnknownLove 2005-04-07 ch 1,	abusenice work.
Infection 2005-04-07 ch 1,	abusethis was very interesting, unlike the prvious review. :(
Ahemait 2005-04-06 ch 1,	abusei dont think i can get used to the fact that you used our friend's name as your character. no, no i dont think i can. please change that, or at least the spelling. oh and is this first person. the first part is 'you talking'. then the second part says: Declan kept playing the tape over and over in the small, empty room. Why had I asked that?' that and is this first person with tow people telling the story...or...? i dun know, it's kind of confusing. also. i think the title should be: dance with the devil' i dun know, jus' sounds cooler. oh, but it sounds really good so far and i love the line:Nice try, but I’m not opening up to someone I’ll never trust anyway just for an accent.' damn, you gotta love those accents, yeah? -cries for the loss of glenn and his irish accent!!- so besides my endless rambling, i'm fine. oh and please R&R either my new poems or finish reading 'hell' s'il vous plait, mon amie.
hitokiri.black 2005-04-05 ch 1,	abuseVery nice start. You made the charactors seem real enough and I found the setting interesting. Great start and update soon.

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