Very nice description. It flows well; I like the words you used. :D

This is a gorgeous description.

The images portray this dark sense of wonder, while the wind remains a link to innocence.

I love it. Its excellent. Wow, very nice. The repitition also adds some thing to it. again very nice.

I love the beauty that you convey. It makes me yearn to be there and feel the wind. That is awesome.

wow. such a great poem. i loved how you compared everything.. everything was worded so perfectly. again, i really liked it.