oh wow! i loved that and now i know why the picture is the way it is. brilliant. rhymes weren't forced and fit well, great great job!

Nice work! Yet another enjoyable read.

*Bella*

This was pretty good. I like the way you wrote it like a nursery rhyme.

That she went home and brokeboth skin and mask with a little sword

I thought that part was a little odd with the sword thing and where you said skin but besdies that I really liked it.

AWESOME, but what else would you expect all the poems are awesome!