In each others embrace our hearts beat... eachother'sBreathing in each others warmth as our lips meet...eachother's

I really liek this.. teh descriptions are wonderful & its very sweet & sad.. great job

I am in love with your style of writing, it delivers so many emotions and makes the reader feel your pain/sorrow/etc.. Beautiful poem, simply beautiful and saddening. ;-; I cried like a baby reading this. Well done! Keep it up! ^-^

!~* Noelle *~!

Wow, really poignant and moving, especially how you built it up to a mournful ending. Made me feel like maybe I was dying and my time was coming to an inevitable end. Great job!