I know my comments may seem to be repeating themselves, but very good!

-Alex

im a huge green day fan and thats what initially prompted me to read this story...i think its really good except for the fact that you've changed jimmy's name from james, er uh, jimmy, to jonathan. that bugs me. and i think it needs a little bit more imagery. other than that i think its really great. keep up the good work.

I love it! kepp up the good work!

This is pretty good. Add the next chapter soon.

hey!!..awesome story...except he killed him?!...he's gonna have an interesting life ahead of him...anyways..keep on writing..and DON'T GIVE UP on it...i'm watching u!

Hey, you said you were writing a story of AI lol. Well, I found it, and it's really good. I especially like the references to the songs and all the tiny quotes. Can't wait for more.

This chapter is amazing! I can't wait to see how you deal with the other chapters in the story. Green Day rule...

I love it so far!