wow, I really like this. Very nice...yikes, I'm scared for college essay. I hate essays. Oh well. *sigh* You expressed your feelings very nicely in this. I especially like the last line. ^_^ Sorry it took me so long to review. Keep writing!

I love it! I'm a little confused with the plural (or lack thereof) of 'haiku', but that's the only thing (and it's probabaly b/c of my limited experience with haiku). I think you should submit this for a college essay (if it fits the requirements).

And here you have written the perfect essay - if only someone reading college essays CARED. I'm only fifteen, but I think I somewhat understand what you're going through...kinda like getting into high school except a million times harder and more important. Maybe you should put up those two haikus of yours - I think they would be an interesting read.