i like it,its diffrent...but i like it.:)

Hi. This is excellent. I like your characternym (if it is a characternym). Nice allusions to the dust and the bible. Thanx for Reviewing me too.-Marguerite

HELL-**-YEAH! You have an amazing gift! Please keep writing! The sudden twist was brilliant, and your portrayal of this character's thoughts and desperate feelings is absolutely captivating. Everybody read this!