I liked it alot, very well writen. I agree with Unerasables interpretation ;) odd how a situation like this can lead to so much friction without anything being said. I dont like the guy in the story tho, so evil and confused..IMO..he needs to be stabbed in the ear hole with a screwdriver or somthing like that.

That was seriously good, if I do say so myself. But then, ask yourself: what was the heroine in the story REALLY musing about? It seems kind of vague, really, if you think about it. Meh. That's only me.~kaz

In my opinion, it feels very intense, Idk why. But it just feels like it (to me). This is very well written though needless to say and it's very interesting. Well done. It's like their trying to say something to each other, something so obvious right in front of their faces and yet their both too scared to admit to each whatever it is their feeling. Lol okay. Open to interpretation okay? :P