i love it. u have 2 continue or ill just die! jk not serious of course. update soon. plesase and thank you! XD

you have a good plot line, however the story lacks in both developement and being brought to life. Your characters accepted things too easily, and there wasn't much develpement of the evil villian. If you would like, I could try to help you bulk up your story.

Your plot is very good though, I like it.

whoa... bryan's crazy. the scene with the fighting was kind of rushed, though. you should make it longer with more descriptions and stuff.

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Bryan is pure EVIL! What revenge? MAybe Alex was a cheater last time, but now, what we are seeing is that he's the "good" guy, and Bryan is the "bad" guy. Hope they two are ok, though i think Abby might forget everyone again, but Alex or smth.

omg! I knew Bryan was up to something bad but this was a grave crime. He will be arrested and jailed for sure for such a thing. He was bad and unfaithful to cheat of Abbey but how can somebody do that? He knew that he could have received a death sentence if he had killed Alex.You are going to show him as a mentally imbalanced person, right? because in other cases no sane fellow could go on risking a revenge that could cause him a legal death sentence or a lifetime imprisonment.

HA. Leia and Evan are together! Can't wait 4 more!!

HeyThat's not the end is it? I thought there is some 'revenge' to come from Brian the evil!I am glad Leia is together with Evan. I felt he was a good guy in the last chapter.Update soon!!

A little fast, but i still love it! So cute!the kids...hahax. All the story needs is for Bryan to get lost and Evan and Leia to get together...

Totally sudden. So interesting...though Alex IS wrong to do that doesn't matter that Lisa started it. Poor Abby...Again...

Cliffy! Haha..Can't stand Bryan...can't he just go fly kite or smth?

I totally love it! Yes, what's more? I am waiting eagerly! I rock, do I? lol Thanks

How much worse can Bryan possibly be? What was he trying to do to Abbey anyway?Please update soon, really or I will die of curiosity! :)

I totally love your updating speed. Imagining authors who update one in three months and you! you update like three times in a day.Aww you go on to making me like Alex Hunter more and more! He totally deserves Abbey.Again looking forward to one of your quick updates!

Abby's starting to remember things. That's good. I guessed it would happen sooner or later. I hope when she remembers everything, i want Bryan to get the worst of things. It's not andrea's fault. IT's BRYAN! BRYAN! BRYAN! HATE HIM! Thanks for updating so fast! you ROCK!

Poor Alex! He thinks Abby doesn't like him that way! Shesh! Bryan still has the cheek to say those things! ARgh!