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linaeve 4/8/05 . chapter 1& that's exactly how it is, thank you. |
negligible fictional force 4/7/05 . chapter 1gotta love that last pun. you should get writer's block more often if you can produce masterpieces like this, love. -kismet. |
Nanashiko 4/6/05 . chapter 1Nice one omi! Exactly how I feel now (that's why I'm going around to look for inspiration). ) -nanashiko |
Ohmm 4/6/05 . chapter 1a tad repetitive, but the parantheses were beautifully expressive. good job! |
Miss Sandra D 4/6/05 . chapter 1 very well done. Will add to my favorite story collection thing. |