|Reviews for alternate lines and nothingness|
| linaeve 4/8/05 . chapter 1
& that's exactly how it is, thank you.
| negligible fictional force 4/7/05 . chapter 1
gotta love that last pun. you should get writer's block more often if you can produce masterpieces like this, love. -kismet.
| Nanashiko 4/6/05 . chapter 1
Nice one omi! Exactly how I feel now (that's why I'm going around to look for inspiration).
| Ohmm 4/6/05 . chapter 1
a tad repetitive, but the parantheses were beautifully expressive. good job!
| Miss Sandra D 4/6/05 . chapter 1
very well done. Will add to my favorite story collection thing.