Wow that was beautiful... damn I loved this line:

"I would rather spend one more hour with you, in the heat of battle and pain and death, than a thousand years alone but safe."

Aww ;o) Real cool. Update soon and thanks for the great read. Adios,

~Bubblegum

all i can really say is a great big AW! that's too madly cute. *sniffs* i lub it! the utter loyality...it just amazes. and you've written this quite well so kudos. *hands you a kudo* ^_^ Tata!

TenderTempted

You write well, very good. Keep it up!