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| and flowers 2005-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseits sarcastic and, your a lush for writing it. |
| addie pray 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI loved this, really well done. It flowed well, and the subject was interesting. I loved the second to last stanza, brilliant. Well done. |
| catseyeview 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abusevery nice again! |
| pneumothorax 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseEdible. Favourites, now. |
| lintong 2005-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah.the cap people are stupidbut then when you start your theatre company,don't forget the girl with the needle thread, and big box of costumes. |
| if sighing 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abusetoday is the catch of the day rotting from yesterday if all the raindrops were lemon drops and gumdropsor if all the snowflakes were chocolate bars and milkshakes, then america would die out first I like this, a stream of conscience writing, flows down the page. fantastic |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abusedepends on the cut whether raw or cooked. m |
| frisson rae 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseyou take normal happy things from daily life and make it morbid/artsy/new. i don't know how to describe that. the arts aren't so dead, just repetitive. i suppose you just don't like beatrice chia and her gang XD |
| zoogath 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseLSD! i'd like that well done please. rare stuff scares me. it's too bloody...to tablesalt: ouija is this board thingy where you push around this little round thingy. i learnt that from true singapore ghost stories! hahaz.hee bye!~zoogath |
| nattum 2005-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abusemellyhatter!rare, please. go us hippies mohn we can always be a gypsy theatre company and move around a bit. or something. heart you too! |
| Chi Ame 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow... what else is there to say? I love Alice in Wonderland, that bit gave it a nice touch! This poem. It's gorgeous. And amazingly creative! Yeah, unfortunately, the arts are dying out. Now it's all about MTV and hiphop. What is this world coming to?! When I become a famous writer (hA!), I plan on publishing a book of poems, and try to get people back in the spirit of poetry! I think that's a good cause. We're raising a generation of kids who don't like to read (ack!), with more "fun" things to do, like sitting in sticky movie theatres and circling the mall for hours... not that I don't like doing those things sometimes, I would just rather be reading or writing. Okay, my turn to stop ranting. :P But great poem! Wow! again. |
| reich 2005-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseheey melly. i love your poem. and i have no favourite stanza cos i love the whole thing. yay. i wouldnt mind being high on angel dust now cos i really need it. oh well. yeah singapore is quite dead arts-wise. hahass. good luck anyway dear. love you alwaysrei! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abusefascinating. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved this, your choice of words, so ironic, but beautiful, and good luck with that theater company. |
| do not resuscitate 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abusei love the fifth stanza, but this whole poem is perfect. you have such a way with words. |