Sounds like the thoughts of a student graduating and wondering where to go after they have a piece of paper with some criteria of what they went to school for in the first place in their fingers.

I liked this. Very nice flow and you have some awsome imagery that turns into a metaphor for an uncertain future. Excellent write.

I enjoy the motif of light and darkness, growing/changing.

Wow... excellent work.

Wow... the emotions I felt when reading this were so intense... words can't describe. You did a wonderful job with this poem!

~ CoolBeans

Captivating is probably the best word to describe this. The words paint a picture of someones daily routine so well. Great job! Do keep writing!

!~* Noelle *~!

The dream that would come true someday. Only becomes a faint, unheard mutter. Wandering inside the light of night. Soon those eyes will open its fate.

-- Kannazuki no Miko " Agony "

This is what I was talking about earlier. Excellent work, I thoroughly enjoyed this one.