Been gone for a couple years, but decided to look up your story because it wasn't finished when I read it before. I hope he ends up with Ratcheal, cus Debbie is creepy as hell lol.

Edgar

That was a quick resolution. I did like how it ended though. With Danny not picking anyone at all really. The ending of the chapter is perfect. But the part about Rachel and Greg sound kind of epilouge type.

People hate me now? Thanks fot that.

Nice chapter title. A parody of Harry Potter and the Order of the Pheonix, I assume? And that was a hilariously funny comment! It seems so random, and so original!

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next update!

Ruby

Haha I can just imagine it now: Danny has a tape recorder in his pocket, and he is taping the whole thing for proof to get her to leave him alone.

Rachel is stupid. I think that she should leave the gay guy (who turned un-gay for her...? Or is just using her?) and go back to Danny.

Debbie better be gone soon she annoys me a lot.

What's the real Debbie's name on fictionpress?

Hey I forgot to say, the person who left the mad review on your other story sounds like a nutter. Mind you, it is pretty original though, and funny cos it's totally random. I never read the story though, I was going to, but then you got rid of it. I bet you thought it was me that left it, but it wasn't.

Oh yeah, this is the real Debbie for all those who don't know. Right, that's all I have to say, sorry about this, my mind's a mess!

The chapter doesn't really seem short. In a good way of course. For earlier in the chapter, wouldn't Greg have not tried to fool Danny who knows he is gay? I liked the development about Debbie but it is really confusing.

I thought that might happen, the baby was't Danny's, cos in the last chapter, Danny's mum said that the whole thing with Debbie was why he was ill last weekend. And I doubt anyone could know that quickly that they were pregnant - let alone having twins.

Anyways, cool chapter, and I look foward to the next update. I go mental if you don't updat this for a few days.

One last thing : pushing kids out the way ... shocking, lol.

Okay well this just confirms my suspicions that Debbie is an escapee from a mental institute...

i mean how could she openly LIE to Danny's parents about being pregnant to their son and then turn around and tell him that in all honesty the kids (coz if i remember correctly u said in ..chapt 7 i think...tht she was preggers wit twins) arent his...

why would she do that? What would she gain by lying about something like that?

newayz i love this story...you're a great author...

Update Soon.

Jorja ; )

Another great chapter! Although, in chapter one, Danny met Debbie on a forum, not be reviewing a story on a site. Juat thought I'd clear that up! How evil is the real Debbie?

Update soon!!

Ruby

awesome chapter Dan, this just keeps getting better and better!!

What did you do?? watch Star Wars before typing this?? lol ... doesnt bother me though coz YODA ROX!! lol gotta love the little green dude!

I'm glad tht Danny's parentals believed him when he told his side of the story...i woulda been majorly ** if they didnt!

Update Soon.

Jorja ; )

Laura's a very cool character. Debbie is strange. Normally, don't people who are outcasted not manipulate other people? oh well, nice chapter anyway!

Yay. Can't wait until you update again. My brain cries when you don't update, haha.

Some random man **...

Haha that made me laugh so hard. For absolutley no reason.

There's a real life Debbie? Ha. That's awesome. Basing characters on real life people is fun. I did that.

Which brings me to my name... FLGMadisonW.

If you were to click on it, where it would bring you to my info page, you'll see that my story is called For the Love of the Game, shortened to FLG by my friends, also the leading characters. The character I based on myself is called Madison Wilson. Madison W. Hence, FLGMadisonW.

FLG is not that good, however. I do not recommend (ugh I can't spell today...) reading it.

Great chapter. It should be interesting to see what happens next, what with Debbie and Danny at Laura's, and then they'll be sharing a room at his house, right? That sucks. I wish I had my own room. I share with my sister. ::sighs::

Oh well. Update again soon.

Amy

Yay! No cliffy! They got annoyed cos you kept putting them in! I can't wait for the next update.

Actually ... if I ever did get pregnant ... I probably would get chucked out. Now that's acuracy! Lol.

Update soon, please!!