awesome! though i don't really get why the secret to the serum was gone. what happens now? i really want to read more about their lives! i loved this story so much, excellent writing!

I just wanted to say that this was an amazing story. I cried and the ending was soo sweet! My only advice don't quit writing!!

This is an amazing story. Great plot, very good characters, wonderful twists and the way things fell into place at the end was excellent. There were just a few typos but they don't really matter much. Keep writing, its excellent!

you made me cry!! that last chappie and the epilogue were so sad, but kinda sweet as well, so i'll call it bittersweet. this is a brilliant story though, cya later ~ Alenor.

h...how could u m..make D..DO..Doug die -bursts into tears- im so sad but i lik ur story u should feel specail it made me cry and i havent cried in three years keep up the good writing

that was sweet and short

Wow, am liking how this sounds! Will read more in a bit...saving it to my favs. list!

aw such a good ending! I lOVED IT!

awe... i'm so upset that dou is dead, but i'm also glad blade got a chance with laney.

weird endingbut unpredictable so its all good

so there will be an epoilogue. I like how this chapter, being shorter then some of you other ones, seemed to tie up all the lose ends... I like it alot. This is was great story and I really enjoyed reading it! THANKS!

WTF is Phoenix city?

...this story was amazing. it made me cry. a lot. i also grew attatched to doug. but i like blade a lot also. it really was amazing. hats off. it takes a lot to make me cry, good job.

wow...that was sad...I was crying

i hate to say this. but i'm probably not the only one who feels this way. but "WHAT THE FRIGGEN HELL KINDA STUN IS THAT!" you killed Doug your a big meanie.