I like the words "billowing" and "engulfed" because the are more fanciful than others. I like the structure because it make it sound like and old memory.
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I like the tone and word choice that makes this seem like an observation because the whole thing feels more like it is from the perspective of a young child to me. I also like the "wanting girls like mad" because it IS in sane in a way.

I like the italics that make those two words more meaningful than the rest. However, this didn't describe smell very much, which defeats the purpose.

I like how this combines with the other poems to create one big idea. You need to add one more period after "eyes.."

I like the "still" that one word suggest past, present, and future. I like how you made more of hearing than just noise, it is so deeply meaningful.

I like the way you described a specific feeling and didn't try too hard. I like the bold because it allows the rest to follow smoothly.

I like the general flow of this, it seems casual and calm, like the storm has passed. I think the part about being mortal is great, it shows a lot of things and sums it up well.

I like the sort of desperate feeling to find something to do with yourself. It's interesting that the last line is separated from the rest, like a sort of separation from thoughts of now and the past.

I like the responses and tone, it seems very much like denial... I don't get the hyphen in "one-half" though, it doesn't need to be there.

I like the way the top and bottom contradicted, it explains the frustration. I don't think you need italics and quotes here, it seems a bit much.

I like how it began, it asked a question and shared emotions smoothly. However, the last line didn't really fit into the rest of the poem.

I like the way you expressed emotions, it is powerful in showing the weakness. However, punctuation seemed a bit off.

I like the perspective, it is very liaccurate. I don't think you need a comma after "now."

You do not need a period after "water" because the sentance continues. I like the ends how the tears are both good and bad, it is very real and raw.

I like that you accept blame, that you are connecting woth anther person's denial. The italics are great, better than quotes in this case because they do not isolate.