Reviews for Say 'Hi' to my Life

Reviews For: Say 'Hi' to my Life

just Merrit. 2007-11-11 ch 9,	abuseWay cool story, Faye reminds me of me...sort of. Any way, cool story.
Water Majordomo 2005-12-15 ch 9,	abuseWOW! Really good story. Now I'm sad that's it's over... Good Job!
Water Majordomo 2005-10-19 ch 4,	abuseHE HE! really good chapter you must write more! p.s. The filthy prep must be eliminated! (not suggestion, just a angry rant.)
Water Majordomo 2005-07-02 ch 3,	abuse:-( hopefully it ends up with the prep getting hit by a train or something! Can't wait to read the next chapter all typed up and everything!
Lord Ryuzaki 2005-05-19 ch 2,	abuseThis is rather interesting. I agree with LittleLimerick83, this story definitely has great potential. I'm sure you'll have a lot of reviews in the future. Update it soon, it's a really good story...
Water Majordomo 2005-05-13 ch 2,	abuseLOL funny story so far. How far are you in typing the other chapters? This is a really good story and I want to see how the war goes.
LittleLimerick83 2005-04-29 ch 2,	abuseYou're welcome for the review. don't feel bad as I never seem to get many either. interesting background. I'm all about Robbie(the jock turned sweet nerd)you never see that. These characters remind me so much of my friends and I when I was in high school. the good ol' days. (sighs). Write more.
LittleLimerick83 2005-04-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is a good start. This might work better as a prologue than a first chapter. It could work as a chappy, but maybe adding a bit more background? I don't know. Who are her friends? What are their names? things like that. You could I suppose address this in later chapters, but right now I don't really have a feel for who your characters are. Maybe let the reader get into your narrator's head a bit more. I'm sorry. This sounds like I don't like what you've done. I really think it has potential. You have every right to ignore me. keep up the good work. I really do want to know what's going to happen.

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