I like this one a lot! It has a good rhythm and feel to it and it's not depressing! Great Job!

There shouldn't be a question mark after 'insist' in the first line, there should be a comma after 'you' in the third line, there should be a comma after 'me' in the ninth line, there should be a semicolon after 'confused' in the eleventh line, there should be a period after 'it' in the fifteenth line, there should be no comma after 'that' in the twenty-third line, and there should be a period after 'be' in the twenty-fifth line. I found these errors very distracting, but were you to fix them, I would probably rather enjoy it as I like the theme a great deal. ~*Mettie*~