I like the rhythym: teh way it flows from word to word. You desrcibe everything so I feel as if I am actually there watching everything you say.Luvs and Hugs,Serpentyna

Really good poem ^_^

That's cool!

I don't know what an owl person is, but I like the abstract effect of this poem. It needs something more of a conclusion, but is a wonderful escape to the troubles of reality. Good job. ~*Mettie*~

Beautiful imagery. I wish I could sit on my roof and just watch the world, then again, that's what my tree is for.

I share your appreciation of nature. It moves me as does it you. I think this is a very personal poem, but I like it alot. nice work. I feel bad for being critical, but I think that the second to last verse would have been cooler if you used different adjectives for fuzzy and bumpy. But if thats how you needed to get your point across then I can't touch it. Anyway, really nice piece.