Wow, I really like it. It's true, I don't think that I appreciate my brother enough, either. It's was beautifully written.

I like it...a bit nostalgic, but you throw in the bit about "deep within the cannot-be's" to give it a touch of self-analysis, which is important to every poem. Excellent rhythm and flow. Not sure about how the Japanese relates to all this. If I tell you about Nostalgia for a White Ship, you tell me about this. I'll email you.

Amen!

Wow.Just wow, Hersh. This is seriously really cool. (Of course, I always love your poetry.) This makes me think about my brother and friends and the stuff we think of and the memories we have.I can always count on your poems to make me smile. Thanks, babe.*Bows*Farewell for now, Milady._Ahrar