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| .love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-07-05 ch 7,  | abuseattention psh lesbians ^_^ ugly nerds with ties and a good attitude ^_^ |
| .love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-07-05 ch 6, | abusethe only thing i ever liked about singing at school was this silly warm ups and playing around while singing |
| .love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-07-05 ch 5, | abusei think i repulse the new kids the only ones who ever talked to me were the ones who had too many piercings to countand other unusual stuff yet they were still annoying |
| .love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-07-05 ch 4, | abusetime to cut classes |
| .love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-07-05 ch 3, | abusethats like when you walk everywhere in the cold and someone says"dont you have a car" yeah i just thought walking in hte cold when my feet are soaking wet beats driving in a nice heated automobile |
| .love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-07-05 ch 2, | abuseattention...just what im running from |
| .love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abusenice |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-07-03 ch 6, | abuseIt wasn't dull. I understand her comment about talking to herself more tom other people- very relatable! Wow, either her barbed, sarky comments are going right over his head or he just doesn't care. I'm finding her frustration with him very funny- he's like a little pestering dog. Nice to know they both have good singing voices. What's the betting they get the lead roles? Anyway, I'm hoping you don't quit this. Luv Kaitx |
| Ebony Spiritess 2005-06-17 ch 5, | abuseCute, cute, cute little story! Yeah I think you should finish it, I wanna see what happens between these two. Keep it up |
| Ebony Spiritess 2005-06-17 ch 3, | abuseLoL. She's cheerful isn't see? Good personality description and depiction. Like my little play on words? lol, keep it up girl. |
| Ebony Spiritess 2005-06-17 ch 2, | abuseWow, this is deep. Nice ending...okay next chapter |
| Ebony Spiritess 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseNice beginning. It doesn't follow any format and I like free write alot, so this was a good intro. |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-06-04 ch 4, | abuseLol. She really can't escape him, can she? He has some guts pinching her I'm surprised he got off so lightly. She had quite a few comic lines in this chapter. Update soon, luv Kaitx |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-05-25 ch 3, | abuseHmm, wondering what is going to happen now annoying new guy is in the picture. like your main character-I can see whre she is coming from(although I'm not QUITE that antisocial. almost. But not quite.) Good point about people asking if a bus has come btw-I get that all the time and it really is a stupid question. Anyway, my only fault with this was how short it was. Hope your next chapter is longer. Luv Kaitx |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-05-12 ch 2, | abuseI get how your character feels about trust and after the poor relationship with her parents it's easy to understand why she feels like she does. Have a feeling she's going to get a bit cruel and manipulative now, so I'm looking forward to that. Luv Kaitx |