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| J-Kid 2005-11-30 ch 1,  | abuseI like this very much. I imagine that she's being chased and that she's turning to him for help. Or that he has been chasing her, and she's pleading with him to stop. Or it could be a romance scene, but . . . eh . . . I prefer it this way better . . . |
| catseyeview 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThe question posed - seduces! Nicely done! |
| sonrisa por favor 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseNice. short. cool. I liked it alot. keep writing. plz |
| Cemetary Gates 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThe short lines add variety to the mass amounts of poetry on FP.com... I can relate to this. Kinda, I guess... Me speaking as a guy. Good job on this! |
| Indigo-Andie 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuse"to be immortal in my mind's eye"...perfect...that line is indelible. btw CANUCKS ROCK |
| Prevaricate 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseNice. The simplicity of the poem itself makes an impression, which is what the person spoken about in the piece is doing to the narrator... I like. Prev' |
| murphy1086 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseHI! Hope you're feeling better! I like your poem, even if I saw it before. Yay! YAYAYAYAYAYA! Alright, I'm gonna go now. You need a favourite stories list. Geez, how am I supposed to know what you like? Haha. See ya soon ;) |
| bigfoot111 2005-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked it, short and sweet but still powerfulciao |
| swtdreamz101 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseimmortal in my mind's eye- like it, nice poem |