This is a really good poem. It's not quite poemish and yet it is. Too hard to explain! I love the rhymes though, I know how hard that is to do. I think this poem is easy to understand, since so many of us feel this way at one time or another. P.S. Thanks for putting me on your favorites list. I updated and posted a new story. I hope you read them!

wow, this is an amazing piece, i love it, i can relate, thank you for sharing