Such a darling piece. Adorable. I absolutely loved it.

That was cute...especially the last stanza. Nice! Keep it up!

I think this poem is lacking something, I'm not sure what it is, something about the 4th stanza doesnt seem quite right. But its good otherwise.

Solo.

Aww. This is adorable. I especially like the first stanza! Karma Chameleon

touching and heartfelt. I can relate to this in most ways. I love the flow and rhyme as well as the rhythm. excellent work!

Sorrow

hm, does this have to do with a certin "somone"?

very well written. nice nice, keep on writing!

great peice, i like it a lot, keep up the good work, thank you for sharing