|Reviews for Would you try to Understand?|
| Lady Hoshi 5/14/05 . chapter 1
I have felt this way so many times. It is a great poem, when I have time I hope to get through more. Great Job
| Unknown Unnamed 4/17/05 . chapter 1
I love it! Your rhyming is awesome!
| ChiquitoPanda 4/16/05 . chapter 1
This is pretty good. Something that most everyone can relate to. A good message, a good poem. Keep 'em coming! TheCryingGame
| sCARZ 4/16/05 . chapter 1
i liked it alot i can relate to it...
| DamascusDragon 4/8/05 . chapter 1
I know exactly what you mean! Going directly onto my favorites!
| Sorrowful Dreams 4/7/05 . chapter 1
I totally can relate to this. I've had the same troubles. This is really touching and hearfelt. I love the rhyme and flow, great piece!
| MaryElise 4/7/05 . chapter 1
Hey That was so great! I'm gonna send that to my mom! Its awsome, it says exactly what you want to say, but the rhymes flow so well and i love your vocabulary!
| SweetAcid 4/7/05 . chapter 1
my poor stephie. i wish I could help you...
| Rowan MacKenzie 4/7/05 . chapter 1
Double wow! I can definately relate to this. Only I don't live w/ my parents. I have a dictatorial grandmother. Keep up the good work kiddo!
P.S. Thanks for your review of 'To An Ex-Boyfriend'!
| Cry Tears of Darkness 4/7/05 . chapter 1
powerful, very powerful
| thedarkthatiwas 4/7/05 . chapter 1
Wow, I can relate to this, good work! Good structure.
| dustytiger 4/6/05 . chapter 1
wow, i have felt this way too, great work, you captured it well, keep it up, thank you for sharing
| Youneek 4/6/05 . chapter 1
I actually like this one. Generally, I avoid the whole teenybopper poetry scene, but this is well-structured.
One thing, though:
Change "except I have lied…" to "except THAT I have lied." It fits into your meter better.