I have felt this way so many times. It is a great poem, when I have time I hope to get through more. Great Job

I love it! Your rhyming is awesome!

This is pretty good. Something that most everyone can relate to. A good message, a good poem. Keep 'em coming! TheCryingGame

i liked it alot i can relate to it...

I know exactly what you mean! Going directly onto my favorites!

I totally can relate to this. I've had the same troubles. This is really touching and hearfelt. I love the rhyme and flow, great piece!

Sorrow

Hey That was so great! I'm gonna send that to my mom! Its awsome, it says exactly what you want to say, but the rhymes flow so well and i love your vocabulary!

my poor stephie. i wish I could help you...

Double wow! I can definately relate to this. Only I don't live w/ my parents. I have a dictatorial grandmother. Keep up the good work kiddo!

P.S. Thanks for your review of 'To An Ex-Boyfriend'!

powerful, very powerful

Wow, I can relate to this, good work! Good structure.

wow, i have felt this way too, great work, you captured it well, keep it up, thank you for sharing

I actually like this one. Generally, I avoid the whole teenybopper poetry scene, but this is well-structured.

One thing, though:

Change "except I have lied…" to "except THAT I have lied." It fits into your meter better.

Great job.