AW SO ADORABLE! Ahahahahahahah, verbal diarreha, my mum says that to me sometimes when I'm hyper but I never get it, but now I get it! I love this story! IT"S SO ADORABLE...
... I might have mentioned something like that already.
yeah. loving Oli. And actually, out of all the stories I've ever read I think Colin ranks my second favorite or third favorite secondary character. he's not that bad... After all, he DID introduce them...
Lee

OMG! Those last lines cracked me up. AHAHAHAHAHAHA
Lee

Ah, I loved this story. And this last chapter made me laugh a lot; it was so cute, and then the end was really sweet. I. Adore. Oliver. And I like cookies as well.

And I think in chapter 7, Oliver was watching Spongebob, then someone said "goober" and I just burst out laughing; there's a goober song in the Spongebob movie and it just started playing through my head. Pretty crazy.

So yeah, beautiful job. Great, lovable characters etc. Very sweet.

Oh, wow, I love this story so far. I've had like a million comments in my head for each chapter and it finally occured to me that I could submit an anonymous review because my account's not varified etc.

I really like the characters...not much detail I can put there. I just really like them. And I've been in love with the song "Friday, I'm in Love" from the first time I heard it. Great choice; great karaoke thing in general.

*Runs off to read the rest*

This is one of the best stories i've ever read. It's short and sweet but not to the point where the characters' personas had to be butchered. I love the way they're imperfect and yet just right. You've given a fresh twist to having an ultimate good and an ultimate evil in this story with the middle guy struggling to choose. I do agree though with Oliver that Andrew is adorable :) Oliver's his own man as well so it's pretty cool that they end up together. Nicely done. I've read this thing ten times over and it still warms up my heart

a good story

I'll have you know I just spent the last three days obsessively trolling through profiles and favorites to find this story.

It sucked. I haven't thought about it in years, and all I could remember was the name Andrew. I don't even know what reminded me of it, but I suddenly HAD to find it, ya know?

And lo and behold, here it is. And to my surprise, the other mystery story that I have been obsessing over, was also by you. Amends, by the way. (I remembered slightly more about that one, but still not enough to find it, sadly).

I just want you to know that you are wonderful, and fantastic, and talented, and a whole lot of other adjectives that I am too lazy to list now that I have stuff to read.

Wow, did i just stay up until 4 in the morning reading amazingly written stories about guys falling in love. Indeed, I did. I think besides Dearly Beloved (which my dearest Courtney and I think of as God or something like that) this is now my favorite ever story. Really and truly, I enjoyed every moment and paragraph and even played "Friday I'm in love" at the appropriate spot. Keep writing, because if you don't the world will most likely implode or something else that we don't want happening.

~Love always: Lysette

amazing story, and such a sweet ending! XD
and it was nice to read a story that wasn't just the basic boy meets boy storyline ^^

The whole dinner scene...I stopped breathing and it got so bad I gave myself hiccups and my mom thought I was having a heart attack! I was nervous FOR Oliver!

bible-humping **tards, OMFG! XD Can I use that?! I'll quote it to you and everything! It's probably what I can call those people who tried to exocise me in Borders a few months ago, if you want the details, just message me or whatever. Anyway, this fic was awesome! H/C, Romance, Angst, loved it! ^_^

When he grins at me, I melt like a processed slice of American cheese on a Bunsen burner.

Is Oliver southern? 'Cause that's something I in a country mood or Paul Den would say!

But your a pretty hussy Oli! ^_^

…. I ** his brains out.

…. Four times.

… in two hours.

…..and it was –amazing-.

(I hate you. – Andrew)

You know you loved it Andy!

1 – I sounded sexy as hell.

That was awfully conceited, but it works when your in the middle of heartbreak.

He was very drunk, mind, and slurring a little, but the sentiment was there. This was Oliver, trying to win me back.

It's so pathetic, it's cute!

But I love you.. A.. and I’ll do anything.. I told my parents.. they kicked me out..”

Oh oh! He's got the hurt puppy thing going on, you really gotta take him back hun!

Sorry, sorry I always talk to the characters even though I know they're not real, it's like how I talk to the TV when I'm watching a movie. Great fic! Deeply ingrossed.

The future psychiatrist in you, Andrew, should have known better! No one is perfect, you should have invastigated the familarily feeling about Oliver, and you shouldn't have slept with that assehole Colin!

And I was right! So the future psychiatrist in ME is squealing! I read, watch, and write so many things that I can analzye fics and it gets better every time! XD You have me on my TOES and I love you for it! *huggles*

the man pelting me with what was left of his whopperIf the fat grumpy man does, you can sue him for assault with a deadly weapon! Do you know how much fat are in those things? Touch your skin and you'll die!

I am such a ** for cheesecake.Who isn't? I especially like Chocolate! Oliver, you can buy me some whenever you like! XP

I guess I should’ve noticed that he was too perfect.

Something had to have been wrong.No one is ever perfect sweety, you just gotta handle as best as you can...*huggles* ^_~ Are you going to share the comfort cheesecake or you going to hog it all night? We all got life problems too, hun! XD

I'm like Dr. Seuss with more man on man action!

Ew, I don't want to think of Dr.Seuss doing any action! O.O

I have heard Raining Men and I'm so sad that one of the woman who sang that died recently, but Let's Hear for the Boy, NEVER IT MY LIFE. Who sings it?

His asse was so nice, you could bounce a quarter off it? Has our boy been listening to too much rap music? His butt clapped while he walked! XD shoot me now!