This was amazing. I think it would make an excellent song. Better than that old Neil Sedaka one. it reminded me a little of a hard-edged Damien Rice.

this has a great rhythm about it. i'm sure it sounds great. keep writing :D

this is very sweet in that unrequited way. i love the end. great rhythm too.

This is very nice! I can relate! Keep writing; you have talent!

Anna