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| Sally-andersonn 2005-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseI felt it was more of a spiritual kind of mortuary. Has a good flow. |
| Stormer 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was an awesome piece of poetry. It actually inspired me to write a new short story. Which I just wrote, and will go and upload *G* |
| MuffinQueen 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. I like a lot. The last verse was my favorite: "Surely, surely these souls are saved, God's legions come at last.A biting wind, the light grows weaker, Peter returns to pass."This is so full with striking imagery and a wonderful sort of...I'd call it hope, but that's not quite it.Thanks for the great Reviews on all my poems. You're amazing. |
| Emmytastic gal 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abusehey... beautiful as always. check out some of my newer poems... thank you write on...-Em |
| Shorty007 2005-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHi, im one of Stephs(Blu Bird) friends... i just wanted to say nice work... keep it up... if you want read my stuff.. but yeah my name is Tiphani or Tiph but peace out.. |
| Blu Bird 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI like it...your description of the coming of the end to someone's life is like definately a work of art...MAJOR MASTERPIECE...keep up the good work Daniel! |
| CryNowLaughLater 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely brilliant. I'm not a religious person in the least but I really like this, I love the imagery and the word choice is fascinating. The title suits it well. Over all this is a grand piece of work. Bravo! |
| Ahemait 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abusereally really good. the lines were a bit long, in my opinion, bu whatever. good descriptiona nd imagery. brilliant idea nd overall job |
| fake-smiles-n-masks 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abusewow...i just really like this...i love the word choice...great job...keep writing...bri |