I really like this poem. It reminds me how I felt when my boyfriend broke up with me; just wanting answers I couldn't get. Great poem.

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weel i know the feeing, and admire the fact that you were able to put it into words, (they're so clumsy sometimes). Its a nice poem and the repetition works well.

I love it! I think you reviewed some of my pieces and said you could relate to them it seems we have alot of the same thought pattern then because i totally relate to this with a few of my relationships past and preseant i love it and please keep sharing!

huh? I dunno, maybe I'm too young to get it. Anyway it sounds good when you read it, and I like it. By the way what's the name of the peotry contest you enter in?

You know, I think this is my favorite piece of your work I've read yet. The repitition comes off very well.

this was super, loved the lines:"Talk to me!I’m begging you!Let me help!Just talk to me!With real wordsAbout real feelings"- these lines are magnificent