I liked it. Wish i could write something short and sweet and just as powerful as your

honestly, the one reason I read this was because of the challenge brought with it- the whole review it if you usderstand thing. but yeah, it was short and to the point so I liked it. I'm thinking that you went out with a guy and he broke your heart and for the first time, you are willing ro forgive for that because you love and want to be with him. in the beginning, the :just a couple months and my hope may return" makes it sound as if he had to go away.

this is really good, very moving and and to the point _

Not bad. Gets your point across.

This is so sad. I can relate because I felt a similar way about smeone. ;; Good poem though.

!* Noelle *!