|Reviews for Unspoken Desire|
| Baddy Abby 7/15/12 . chapter 1
| BrkLynzum 3/15/11 . chapter 1
Awsome Story, I'll be Happy to Read More Of Them!
I'm Getting Hard Already!:) LOL
| Richard Lafayette Cox V 7/15/10 . chapter 1
Not bad, but I felt like the middle was a bit awkward, the part before they begin to mess around.
Other than that, good writing :)
| Estelin 7/21/08 . chapter 1
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more.
| LeFoxy 10/21/07 . chapter 1
Awesome angst! Good story!
| oksana 6/17/07 . chapter 1
that was so hot. i want more!
| Glacier Pheonix 3/13/07 . chapter 1
Damn now I'm horny thanks to you!
| Vanessa 1/10/07 . chapter 1
Please continue!Great job on the story so far1Continue soon please!
| Niwatori 4/7/05 . chapter 1
Nothing quite like a girl about to "organism". I wonder if it was a micro-organism. Hee hee hee!
AHAHA! Two people yelling each other's names and climaxing at the same time? That's hilarious!Hee hee hee... Just like in the movies! AHAHAHA!
Funny funny Very funny piece.