Nance leave my character alone. Just because you cant get a bf doesnt mean u should prevent others from being happy. no shes not gonna move on. shes gonna stay loony and depressed and mute forever and ever and ever. gawd mann.

This has the potential to be very interesting, especially since its based on your life. Very great start so far. Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews on the Assassin of Kevari! It means so much to me *hugz* Keep up the great work!

I can relate in ways, except the name, where she was born...and my parents don't expect me to be super perfect, but otherwise i can relate.

hi, i liked this. the prologue really got me, and that's a really important part of the story. it promises much, ill be reading along. the style of the writing is nice, because it's drmaatic and down to earth (is that possible?). continue.

Hello again! Im probably gonna review each and everyone of these chapters... Yay! You're starting out great, a born writer i believe. And another thing, how old are you? Im just wondering... Please write more! :)

Um, this will be better when you do more chapters.

Hey! Ive only read the first and only chapter of your story, and your already on my favorite author list! I have a bunch of asian friends and they all "perfectified" me. I hate it when something I do isn't perfect, so I really want you to write more chapters! I want to see how you got or are getting through this. Please writw more chapters! :D