I love the imagery. it is intense yet haunting and very subtle.

man...this is freakin amazing. I read through your other stuff, thinking "i'm too tired to review let alone read more" but the sheer beauty of your words caught me and trapped me and pinned me to a sheet of glass, and I had to review.

This is so tangled and silver and spun like strings of melted bronze, and I love it. You take images that are so diefferent and meld them together, not forcing them, and then tie it up so gently into a stroke of genius. I am in awe.

clever - i liked how you used card houses and sand castles together - two things very different; but in the sense of their fleetingness they are exactly the same. Majestic, but with a little water or a little wind they fall to the ground and dissappear, or disentigrate as you say it. I've liked all of your writing, but this one got me thinking. good job (i tried to constructively criticize but then i realized you are a better writer than i am.

Wonderful. Almost makes me sick.

you are another one to join the avant-garde circle, i can see. your poetry is majestic, contemporary, it is ecstacy, whether the drug or the high. i dig. -kismet.

You're an awesome writer, please continue to post work here.

I'll say it again, you are truly talented, your work has life and breathe, as though it lives seperatly from the page, which is always amazing for both reader and writer. Update your work soon, I'd love to see what else you have in store for my sense.

Much love,Juliet.

This is really beautiful. I don't find poem of this quality often enough anymore. Awesome, awesome work - your wording, diction, imagery - all great. I'll try to keep an eye out for you.

im surprised you have as few reviews as you do. I like your work, write more please.

the formatting makes for a fascinating read, and the images are carefully chosen and piercing in the mind's eye, esp. "vanishing point" wonderful symbolism.