I like it, alot, nice imagery, short sweet and captivating. Some of the good poetry out there. Makes me happy giggle with the nice flow of the job.

Joseph

I like it. Good EMOtion.

*Amber*

wow.. very powerful

interesting, makes me think haha ;D nice poem

I really like this! Love how you used the second line to rhyme and the first to sort of "tell something" this is good! Everlasting-Eyes

wow *shudders* this is a great peice, sent shivers up my spine, good work, keep it up, thank you for sharing

simple but beautiful. i reallyl ike it a lot. the rhyming was not forced and seemed to add to the style of the poem. i like the part about hiding the mess under the rug, as if to hide one's secrets there. nice job