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Reviews For:
Oh No
Last Dance
2005-06-03 . chapter 1
thats so sad, like really sad...wow...
Spector'sGirl
2005-04-22 . chapter 1
extremely creepy and disturbing, but good nonetheless
kt in the sky
2005-04-22 . chapter 1
oh my god. that is creepy. wow. i love poems that tell little stories like this so i really like it. awesome poem, keep on writing!!
misssandradee
2005-04-07 . chapter 1
oh god that was scary.
dustytiger
2005-04-07 . chapter 1
wow, that is such a sad story, and cautionary too, guns are so uneeded... wow, agian i must say it thank you for sharing
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