Good content.

*Amber*

beautiful

The imagery in the first 25 lines or so of this powm is fantastic. I love it. But I feel like it sort of devolves. I mean, you have all of these powerful similes and imagery, but then it gets way too simple. The last part of them doesn't seem to fit. But those first 25 lines are near perfect.

mallory this is sadly your best work ever. the imagery and language sent shivers up my spine. im sorry about everything. i really hope everythign turns out all right.

wow, great peice, never lose that, thank you for sharing