I was wondering when you're going to update ' The Distortia Effect'

Cool so far. Keep it up. Plus, thanks for reviewing my story.

Oh, I thought it was going to be more of the story. But never mind. I still like how you add in these seemingly "factual" pieces of information on the terms that you will be using throughout your story.

Keep writing.

~Silver

A wonderful beginning. Your introduction is excellently detailed and adequately sets up the situation. I love the confusion that you've portrayed and the kind of unconnected way that Angelina veiws the things that are happening. The repetition of how you repeat that she's not worried is another great technique that reinforces her unconnected feelings.

Overall I'm enjoying your story and I am incredibly interested in seeing what happens next. So I'd better keep reading.

~Silver

This is an interesting effect where you start out with a definition. I like it. It's gotten me intrigued with whats going to happen in your story and how, if ever, you're going to convey these symptoms. Good work.

~Silver

Oh ho! This is wonderful. The mere fact that you have wonderful details with rich vocabularies really make this story even more realistic. The thought of not being able to remember anything at all is frightening, but interesting too! I can see that this story has great potentials.

Keep up the great now. :)