Whoa...May I ask what REALLY happened?'Now I'm in a roomWhere the windows have bars.The walls are padded -It's kind of bizzare.'That part kind of reminds me of some sort of jail cell, then I got the idea this related to drinking, I doubt that’s what the real story is about though

I can't say I've done that, so I don't know what a helium high (so to speak) feels like. But this is really funny. It reads a lot like She Silverstein: quite silly, but amusing. Good job.

Thanks for making me laugh!! It was much needed. Great job!

Oh my god that was absolutly hilarious, I'm still laughing, and getting yelled at by my mom for waking her up but hey who cares it was funny.

Who woulda thunk that's what happens when you inhale helium? Lovely little crazy poem.

*rolls on floor laughing* helium is so much fun ^_^--pammy-

now i haven't had the pleasure of sucking on a balloon yet, but you make it sound so fun! thank you for your review, it made my day!

~C

Lovely. That just made my day.

Ha ha! Funny story! And related well in its poetic form! A friend of mine passed out after breathing in too much helium. Dangerous stuff. Great work on this one too!

this poem is great it's really funny!

quite funny, the end is a little extreme but i guess it depends how much you took in! i did that one day for a couple hours, was really quite funny and all i noticed was that everything seemed funnier, we ended up on a bus singing the girls part of "pretty fly for a white guy" ah memories! x weasel within x

it's good... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! it made me alguh the WHOLE way throu! hahaha! LOVE it!

That was hilarious, nice job!

Lol, this was really fun to read. I remember laughing really hard when my sister sucked on helium once... Heehee. Good times.

By the way, thanks so much for reviewing "Our Sunshine Garden". I really appreciated it since you were the first to comment on it.

That's awesome! I love it!

Great humor, and I hope that you didn't end up in a padded room in real life!

As to your review, it was inspired by the fact that I don't feel like I fit in my own skin, and the shadow of a helium balloon (coincidence?) on my bedroom wall.