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| ellabella 2005-05-02 ch 3, anon. | abusemawahahahaha, coolies. i adore black eri's work. her work is so incrediable and she's only my age! its amazing. i must go and read all my updates. thanx for the update, i noticed that she had lust up and you didn't... cya next chapter. ellabella |
| Orient Fox 2005-05-02 ch 3,  | abuseWow, just saw the pictures!! They are excellent...and wow, these poems are still awesome! Seriously, you are an excellent poet...ah, wish I could say more but I have to write a huge essay! Talk to you later, cheers, and happy updating! *Orient Fox, aka Grace* |
| scuttlebutt 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this one. Is it me or are they getting more evil by the second, lol. O and I can't seem to see any of your links for Werecat and the this. It comes out saying page not found. Is it my computer? Well update soon!! |
| tarienelle 2005-05-01 ch 2, | abuseI love your style! The best poem I've read on fictionpress. Marvelous. |
| scuttlebutt 2005-04-30 ch 2, | abuseI love it how you made Envy kill the girl, now don't think I like stories with murders of innocent people but your story shows how envy can really get to a person and how you portrayed Envy cruel. Also how you made Vanity so concieted and how she made him go blind. Their outcome in the end associates well with their qualities. |
| ellabella 2005-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abusejust curious... who is black eri and how do i see his or her works? |
| ellabella 2005-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abusedude, i love snakes. absolutly adore them. but i dont associate envy with them... i associate power (i think thats creepier if you ask me). cool poetry, you are one mad (in a good way) chica. ellabella |
| ellabella 2005-04-13 ch 2, anon. | abusethat was mad. i've never read anything like it. so cool. ellabella |
| BetterOffAsLovers 2005-04-11 ch 2, | abuseWhoa, this is cool. Way, cool. Update soon! |
| smile persephone 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is lovely. Exquisite, really. I love the ending. (Adding this to Favorites.) |
| kpSILENT 2005-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy favorite poem yet. I didn't get it til the end. Actually i thought it was going to suck until the end. I didn't get that tou were going to have seven different chapters. Good idea. Roc on. |