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| Parfume 2005-08-01 ch 1,   | Hm, I like your poem heartbreak more, BUT I like this one as well. haha. |
| svonnah-la-fay 2005-05-17 ch 1, | I think this sonnet is better than your other one. I wanted to comment on the reality of this poem. It was different than the other sonnets I have read (mainly Shakespeare) because some lines are not as long as others, so it was a bit unnerving to read at first, but you got all of your syllables in, and it was cool. I also wanted to tell you that I liked the way things rhymed -it wasn't forced, it simply told the story. Good job. |
| ccccccyynnnnnn ^^;; 2005-04-10 ch 1, | hi this one kinda weird its more of a listing bulima is seious u should make it more i dunno the word a little more depressing to reach the point (like how u say mine r too depressing!)pretty good though |