that's good... and makes me want to cry... it's tragic and beautiful all at the same time. great job.

Really liked the imagery in this poem, really added another dimension to the idea :)

I love it, it's cool how you were able to relate almost eveything to being broken.

Wow, that is really impressive. I am in awe. lol. I recognised some of the lines from an evanescence song, "Breathe No More"...was that intentional?Continue writing, you're amazingly talented. Don't ever let your talent go to waste!Shine On