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| MuseofMagic 2008-05-26 ch 7,   | One of the most interesting stories I've read recently. It really drew me in. And I will admit that this Sivin character interests me and I hope for much more interaction between him and Kallana. I like that this story is a bit slower in pace, I admire others' ability to write like that. I tend to jump from one event to another pretty quickly. It's a habit I assume stems from the fact that I become bored unusually quickly at times... Anyway, I hope you find the time to update this story soon as I'd really love to read more. |
| alias451 2008-01-15 ch 7, | The fic has a great start and is well written with few grammar mistakes and I hope you continue it. The plot is interesting and definitely captures the reader. I hope you update soon and good luck with self publishing your other work~ |
| fantasizer 2005-05-04 ch 5, | this is a nice story so far. well written, though there's very little forshadowing, and the little there is doesn't amount to much... perhaps a little more? don't exactly have speculations right now... but i really like it. |
| pLaYFul*PixI3 2005-04-18 ch 3, | Yo, remember me? Well, you probably don't but anyway i am your true fan! i've read two of your previous stories, "That Which I Desire" and "Perimeter Red" which you had removed it from the net. And now i am on to your third story! Keep it going! |
| Liz 2005-04-14 ch 3, | Ok, so you know im going to start asking for pictures now :) I luv it!! |
| Teia the Hobbit 2005-04-13 ch 1, | Wow! Your story is really impressive so far, and it's only chapter 1. I loved your style of writing - so fluent and smooth, not like a lot of amateur writing that I stumble upon on this sight. It's hard at this point, in fact, to differntiate you from a professional author - the style you use, your use of words, your description of character, and the facts of the socity and culture that you let slip smoothly into the story. I have a good idea in just one chapter of what the land is like, without knowing that many facts. I liked how you introduced your characters and the depth you've already put to them (I mean as much as you can in one chapter). I think it was very well written and it makes me interested to find out what happens and how Kallana and Kaellel are going to hook up, lol. ;) Keep it up! |