Wow, I really loved this story. It was amazing.
Though, like any sap, I found myself wishing Myst and Pheonix would really get together instead of being close friends... but I don't think that would go too well, for some reason.

I'm about to read the sequel next. I'm sure it will be as great as this one. :)

~Lola

great story! really like it! I'm gonna go read more of your stuff!

This chapter was another good one (despite the violence, because if I said that kind of stuff was bad I'd be a hypocrite.) The gang made me angry, beccause I have personal experiences with the word 'freak'. ...Well off to finish the story now. :)

you know, I've only ever read fanfiction about the Teen titans--but Myst kind of reminds me of Raven from the stories I've read. ...another really good chapter...and I just thought I'd put that thing about the Teen Titans out there. LOL.

wow. That was a very descriptive chapter. "dirt"? ...:( wow.

I love the description. It makes the drama really interesting, and quite well thought out.

Keep writing, Wen! Youre a great writer.

I received this review from a classmate/friend: i like the conversational tone, seems like i'm getting a nice tour of the setting and characters (like those college tours, sorry for the parallel). you give lots of explanations, descriptions which are great. sometimes though, you could use a bit more showing than straightforward telling. but i'm not finished so later...

I received this from a reviewer: im reading the innocent too and what can isay, its just as good as the guilty. Its an awesome story and i can totally see this as a movie. Great job at creating this awesome story, and i love how you have phoenix's forbidden love for myst. i think it really adds a lot of passion and meaning to the story.Thanks to all reviewers and readers!

Excellent story. I commend you on a job very well done. Just one question. Can you make a sequel?

confuzzing, but interesting all the same. needs some more details, you know more about this world than we do!

Otherwise, good story.

:) CD

Yay! I finished your story... Oh dear... nothing more :). Oh well, I'm glad I finally got to read a story that was done. As far as the stroy goes... I liked good. Brava.

nice ending. I liked it. but who will take care of the kids?

Is... that the end?

*smiles* definately a good one! keep up the good work!

sad, slightly depressing, but very interesting. I take it this is futuristic fantasy?

:) CD