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once rhythmatic 2008-05-15 . chapter 10
Good, good. Lots of lemons. :P
kiki 2008-02-10 . chapter 10
please update!
MlleKathy 2007-10-06 . chapter 6
Lol omigosh.. I had no idea that you had the same name for your characters. :) Just know that I got the name, "Gavin" from my nephew, I like that name so I chose it lol.. And how weird, Adam is Elliot's middle name. XDD I got that from my cousin, I get most of the names for my characters from family members. "Ethan" is my half-brother.
Whelp! Thanks for reading my story, I really like this one! I like how you write, I need to slow down a bit on my storys things change so fast XD I just can't wait to get all the mysteries solved. Thanks anyway! -Kathy
mia5081 2007-07-15 . chapter 10
I love the story so far, and was wondering if you ever plan on finishing it. Please? lol
Update soon!
~Mia
Rubedo Jr. 2007-05-02 . chapter 10
I have to say, I find it...difficult to do my work when my inspiration is lacking. And now that I'm on my last week before finals, I could really use some reassuring...but my favorite story hasn't been updated in so long...gah!
Shun Arima 2007-01-05 . chapter 10
Hey goofball... They copywrited it to YOU. Not to their site. They're doing you a favor, no one can steal and reproduce your work without getting in trouble since fictionpress is protecting you w/ the copywrite. Pleas update soon.
merrymowmow 2006-12-09 . chapter 10
I was wondering when you're going to update.
Jess 2006-12-05 . chapter 10
© Copyright 2005 Esquirella (FictionPress ID:241472). All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of Esquirella.

Isn't that what you meant? I see it, does it not appear on your comp?
total vintage 2006-11-12 . chapter 10
UPDATE!
komodo dragon 2006-11-09 . chapter 9
Is that it? Please say no! You have got to update!
paputsza 2006-11-04 . chapter 5
you're so human...
paputsza 2006-11-04 . chapter 2
Every once in a while, i scroll up just to see if it's /really/ rated M. And then I squeal in joy when i discover that it is!
Anti-Socialite 2006-10-04 . chapter 9
You just stop posting chapts on this one then? Huh well ok it would be nice to know the rest but you more things I suppose.
distortedreflection 2006-09-13 . chapter 9
OH OH OH i like Gavin though he does kind sound of pathetic at the begining. it was still good though
ArchAngelic the Reborn 2006-07-15 . chapter 9
I'm curious to see how Adam's parents will react, so please update soon.

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