Okay um wow. A bit-o-boy-fluff, standing up to A* 'friends' and trying to make things right. Now that's a rollercoaster ride of what's gonna happen next.

Hm, very very interesting. Now I've gotta read on to see how it plays out between Adam and Gavin.

Good, good. Lots of lemons. :P

please update!

Lol omigosh.. I had no idea that you had the same name for your characters. :) Just know that I got the name, "Gavin" from my nephew, I like that name so I chose it lol.. And how weird, Adam is Elliot's middle name. XDD I got that from my cousin, I get most of the names for my characters from family members. "Ethan" is my half-brother.

Whelp! Thanks for reading my story, I really like this one! I like how you write, I need to slow down a bit on my storys things change so fast XD I just can't wait to get all the mysteries solved. Thanks anyway! -Kathy

I love the story so far, and was wondering if you ever plan on finishing it. Please? lol

Update soon!

Mia

I have to say, I find it...difficult to do my work when my inspiration is lacking. And now that I'm on my last week before finals, I could really use some reassuring...but my favorite story hasn't been updated in so long...gah!

Hey goofball... They copywrited it to YOU. Not to their site. They're doing you a favor, no one can steal and reproduce your work without getting in trouble since fictionpress is protecting you w/ the copywrite. Pleas update soon.

I was wondering when you're going to update.

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Isn't that what you meant? I see it, does it not appear on your comp?

UPDATE!

Is that it? Please say no! You have got to update!

you're so human...

Every once in a while, i scroll up just to see if it's /really/ rated M. And then I squeal in joy when i discover that it is!

You just stop posting chapts on this one then? Huh well ok it would be nice to know the rest but you more things I suppose.