Wow. I am speechless. This is so good, and I don't even know where to begin. Maybe it's the repetition of the lines, maybe it's the diction you chose, maybe it's the analogies used... maybe it's all of them placed together to create a beautiful peace. Good job!

-ShadowNemesis

Awesome rhythm, and I love the repetitions and rhyme scheme. Hey, when the reason is right... Oh, thank you for your review!

Cool poem. I like the beat and rhymes...and yes, villanelles are difficult.

interesting