Oh, lord. You have no idea how much I enjoyed that. A particularly unsavory girl in my adv. poetry class recited Blake's original every other day.

Needless to say, it was not one of my favorites.

What fun.

~Effervescent-Sentiments

Oh man, I love it. The idea seems much more different than Blake's poem, more of a poem that happens to have a similar structure than a direct parody. In the line "Your dreadful glare its white with rage", I think you have the wrong "its," but that's the only bad thing about your poem that I can find. I love it. Woo! =)

THAT WAS FANTASTIC! ... *Ahem* Sorry... I thought it was funny. In terms of humor, your version is just as good as Blake's!

...does 'terms of humor' even make any sense? oh well, good job!

Its interesting, to say the least. I must admit I always thought the tyger and the lamb were perfect to mirror off of eachother, so the introduction of another poem to that, as well as a slightly different subject matter/angle [if that makes sense] kind of threw me for a loop. I had to read it twice before I could appreciate it fully. Its a good poem- I really love the end.

and the Lamb?

Wow! i love it! This could just be a classic! A couple of rhythmic issues in some of the stanzas, disturbing the flow, which you might need to look at, but other than that... GREAT!

wow, this is good!! You have a really good structure going there, and the rhymes totally flow together extremely well. I enjoyed reading this... it made me smile. :) I just finished reading Blake's "Tiger" in class (here's my life story for ya), and I really like your version here. Keep it up!

-ShadowNemesis