This is strong and really good.

ah, emotional outbursts that end in damnnation...nothing better! I liked the last line "If only i could find it" it was a good way to wrap the whole deal up

~Mack

Feral! I love your ** poems! It's madness! Whenever I read one I feel like becoming one of those stories you see on the evening news where a guy takes his wife hostage because she slept with his best friend.

Heh, the anger and angst in this was just outstanding, I can tell that this isn't just random words on a page, it's way too emotional to be just that.

Anyway, awesome poem, this is going on my faves, whether I have room or not ^_~

-Marth

nice, I really enjoyed this one. This is a poem with soul. Keep writing. -ADD

wow. very powerful & well written

ooh... very nice. felt that angst quite well...

- ciardha

powerful poem, Feral! ^-^ *hugs* i missed you, your poetry has improved in the months. I can see it, still beauiful but the style has matured. ^-^ Beautiful, Feral! I love it! Great job, keep it up!

!~* Noelle *~!