::sob:: Oh, I think I'm going to cry! The last three lines were especially affecting.

why is it that authors veiw their work as crap, and others dont... I think its very good.

Very sweet, it sort of combined all the bits I like about modern poetry, together with the best of the old-fashoned stuff. Sad message, though... but alas a true one :)... Again, sorry it took a while to review, pounding. Head. Ache. Doesn't. Make. Sense. I'm on so many damn painkillers I shouldn't even be AWARE of my head... I digress... Of course it's not at all up to the standard I've come to expect from you and somewhat take for granted ::looks snooty and guilty at the same time:: but it's still better then most of the stuff out there, and it still has that one quality that devides Poetry from 'thoughts laid down in rhyme', it rings true.

I am the queen of rhyming and rhythm and all things poetic- not! The reason for that comment was that I know the lines are different lengths, but you actually managed to make them rhyme and flow, which is more than I can ever do. I think that the emotion is well-expressed through.

*sniff* It is so sad *sniff* and I cant review this without offering sympathy or something similar. Sympathy??

My favourite line: Question the night, but receive no answer- most poetical line of them all...

i like this very much.

OMG! That matched my feelings perfectly! ...I can't even say how on the dot you were. I loved it!...Oh and by the way - Remember how you said that Koe sounded as if she was trying to convince herself of loving Kuro. Your so smart! Because yeah...that IS what's she's doing. Very, very intellegent you are.