yup, i still enjoyed the translations. Melody is interesting, i would like to see how she plays into this whole story. i suppose time will tell.

~Mack

PS if ur still interested (if not, please feel free to disregard) we've updated

heh, i liked seeing the translations on the bottom, that was fun. what a unique and interesting story you have here. i liked it. it was fun. the mood-switching, the crazy parents, how everyone was so calm about him getting engaged at 15...maybe a few more details would have been nice, but thats all i've got for CC

~Mack

PS thank you SO much for your kind review!

i think james is in love, like it or not! :[

There was a reason I didn't review this... FP musta been being bitchy, or something, but I'm pretty sure I sent you a (alas crappy) email review to make up for it somwhat. So I can now use this space to...Ahem... *POKE* you!! Why haven't you updated this you bad bad bad bad bad boy? *poke poke poke*

Is JAMES ever going to learn what Arianna's saying? How utterly confusing. But I suppose Kotu Morin means something along the lines of good morning? :D Why do i get the feeling that Aril totally understands her? V. good chapter!

THIS. WAS. **. AWSOME!! Definitely my new favorite!! FINALLY a James I can relate too! You're even better in first person then you are in third, I am extremely impressed. Ayiik I can't get over how fun this chapter was! Opening in the closet was ** brilliant, I'll have you know. Hehe, you still have a slight problem with seeing girls as objects(for example - birthday gifts) but I am fully willing to forgive you in light of your INCREDIBLY COOL new James-makeover, I mean, he actually has emotions now...! I actaully like him, and I really love the little day-today stuff you added in there, like the cartoons and video games. Also the bit about him turning red at the mention of Arianna's nightclothes, you've really -and I suppose this word has more then the average plethora of meanings when dealing with one of YOUR characters- humanized him. IT WAS SO ** GREAT!

*desperately tries to figure out Arianna's language* Uhm...not working! Lol. Very good! I can't wait to see what happens - especially what the deal is with Arc.

awesome story! i really liked how you ended the story, super job!!