Wow, i like the ending. the potion part was weird. Where was Mel in this chap? She out eating ice cream? Okay great chap.

-Phoenix Child

Wow such a plot. melanie's eye color changed from emerald to cerulean blue... um... wow. Kai is a Russian guys name.. -cough- Laters, gotta go. Great chapter. oh, wait, Takata and Katsuka are sisters. Is melanie just a friend assassins then? or is she a triplet? TTYL.

-Phoenix child.

You did a lot of detail on Dreya. I like that. It gave a good visual. End of my outstanding comment. the plot is really developing. keep on it. Great chapter like always!

-Phoenix Child

This had better details and the visuals were better. I kinda was a bit disappointed that there wasn't more depth to the escape part where they nearly got hit. They know Taiquondo (sp? i don't really care to know how it's spelled though) lol so i think it would have been better if they used their skills to get out of that mess, shoes or no. It was a little sudden with the kidnapping though. But it flows. Seems there's a little pride in Takata tht gets in the way. Again aren't assassins highly trained in killing? They stand ontop of stupid buildings with their sniper rifles and shoot and nobody would ever know who the assassin was. That's how assassins work. Watch 'Kill Bill 1 & 2'. It's violent the fighting scenes are good. Err... How old are you again? You're probably older than me but OH WELL. I watch really weird movies sometimes. Again, oh well.

-Phoenix ~Child~

I have a comment. last chapter you said when they entered this place the temperature dropped. here Mel says that it's unbelievably hot. Um... clarification? Sorry for the brief critisism, haha. The fight scene was well written. it seemed though that natsume seemed a little... um, underexperienced? sorry, but that's what it seemed like. Onto the next chapter (it still as a great chapter, i advise for you to put a little more detail to make it more visually interesting) Here goes nothing.

-*Phoenix *child*

You seemed to focuse entirely on Melanie this time. Is she the main character of this? Curiousity kills the cat. XO Katsuka's eyes are red? Well how many of my characters have red eyes? A lot. But they're mainly elementals so well... nevermind. Read the stories to see what i mean. Great chapter. I like the depth. The plot has a lot of drive. =)

-Phoenix

Melanie has blonde hair? That's a bit of contradicting... oh well. I like how you put the setting in where the mood changed through the chapter. Very nice nd I'll move to the next chapter. Oh and Washing Away the Blood Chap 3 will be up soon. Look for it or put me on alert or something. Hey go to my profile and check out the others. For the other few i vowed i wouldn't update them again unless one person reviewed... It makes the whole thing so very pathetic. Ttyl.

-Phoenix (name etc =P)

Humph, I'm trying to figure out why you chose to use the name 'Melanie' as it mens dark haired. I might as well keep reading. It is actually a very good beginning.

hey i like the story and the pple so far keep up the work ^ ^

Yay! This is pretty good so far! I don't know if you know who I really am (Luke, I am your father). This is your cousin, Alyssa. Uncle David gave me your pen name so I could check this out. It's so weird! I write on fanfiction.net... if that didn't turn out, it's f a n f i c t i o n . n e t under the pen name Legolas-gurl88. I'm writing a Harry Potter story right now, in case you want to check it out! When I heard that you were writing stories on this, I was excited to start reading!Legolas-gurl88

Oh snaps! My old review didn't go through. Damned computer. Anywho, great ending! Keep writing!

Kchan

Great ending sorry for not reading ealier i just got of punishment. I'l lbe sure to look out for ur new fics.

yay, from me!

Wow...so much dramatics and all at the end. Neh, Katsuka! What happened? :3 And two whole updates since I last reviewed here! Yay for you! Thanks for posting me name and story up. I feel ...honoured. ^^ *happyness* Update again soon!

Kchan

Very good - and I saw my name on your profile page!

Wow! I'm honoured...

This story's really great - I really want to know more about the little Dreya...